Pages

Friday, 8 July 2016

poetry

This week we have learning how to do our poetry.
Posted by at

33 comments:

  1. Anonymous25 July 2016 at 09:51

    Hi Waiorere it's Te Aroha from Kawakawa primary school :) I really like your poems! You have good alliteration in your poems. I also really like how when you go onto the the next page it flips. Thats really clever ;) How do you do that? Nice work =D

    ReplyDelete
  2. Anonymous26 July 2016 at 13:58

    Thank you Te Aroha you made me cry and I'm happy.

    ReplyDelete
  3. Anonymous26 July 2016 at 14:22

    Nice Job wai Your so good for your poetry

    Can you teach me your trikes plz?

    C ya hope you feel better wai

    Amethyst :D

    ReplyDelete
  4. Kylie Norman28 July 2016 at 09:41

    Kia ora Waiorere! It's Room 7 from Kawakawa! We were excited when we saw your blog. We really liked what we saw on your blog. You used some really good extraordinary adjectives, we loved your rhymes, and it was really cool the way you made your slides moved.
    Ka kite ano :)

    ReplyDelete
  5. Anonymous28 July 2016 at 10:25

    thank you room 7 from kawkawa:)

    ReplyDelete
  6. Anonymous28 July 2016 at 10:25

    This comment has been removed by the author.

    ReplyDelete
  7. Anonymous4 August 2016 at 12:47

    This comment has been removed by the author.

    ReplyDelete
  8. Anonymous4 August 2016 at 12:51

    hi waio its mahuta from kawakawa primary school i like it its cool by mahuta comment soon pleas waio

    ReplyDelete
  9. Anonymous8 August 2016 at 11:15

    hi waio

    ReplyDelete
  10. Anonymous8 August 2016 at 11:15

    hi waio

    ReplyDelete
  11. Anonymous9 August 2016 at 09:01

    thank you mahuta

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Anonymous10 August 2016 at 10:09

      This comment has been removed by the author.

      Delete
    2. Anonymous27 August 2016 at 11:44

      who me waio Eva

      Delete
  12. Anonymous10 August 2016 at 09:50

    hi waio

    ReplyDelete
  13. Anonymous10 August 2016 at 09:54

    Hi waiorere i think that your poem is really cool i heard you cried because you think that everyone forgot about you.
    by havahna.

    ReplyDelete
  14. Anonymous18 August 2016 at 18:30

    hi cool work you have done

    ReplyDelete
  15. Anonymous24 August 2016 at 09:47

    This comment has been removed by the author.

    ReplyDelete
  16. Anonymous24 August 2016 at 09:51

    Hi Waiorere It's Leilani from Kawakawa primary miss you heaps and great work on your poems I especially like the alphabet poem and the buzzing bee animation nice work and if you want to check out my blog one day go to seeya

    ReplyDelete
  17. Anonymous27 August 2016 at 11:43

    Hi Waiorere I like your poem its really cool and can you teach me
    how to flip the paiges please I miss you so much I hope we can see you at kawakawa primary school some day plz come and visit us plz
    by Eva

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Anonymous29 August 2016 at 09:11

      thank you Eva

      Delete
    2. Anonymous12 September 2016 at 10:57

      This comment has been removed by the author.

      Delete
    3. Anonymous27 September 2016 at 15:21

      waio answer me

      Delete
    4. Anonymous27 September 2016 at 15:21

      This comment has been removed by the author.

      Delete
  18. Anonymous17 September 2016 at 09:39

    hi waiorere its rawiri i felt realy sad when you left but i've got to say nice poetry ooooo and do you take your crombook home?

    ReplyDelete
  19. Anonymous20 September 2016 at 14:05

    on but thank you

    ReplyDelete
  20. Anonymous19 October 2016 at 11:49

    I love your poems keep up the good work.

    By JD

    ReplyDelete
  21. Anonymous25 October 2016 at 13:30

    thank you

    ReplyDelete
  22. Anonymous25 October 2016 at 13:30

    thank you

    ReplyDelete
  23. Anonymous25 October 2016 at 14:29

    hi waiorere my name is Maumahara and I like your learning.

    ReplyDelete
  24. Anonymous25 October 2016 at 14:30

    hi waiorere my name is Maumahara and I like your learning.

    ReplyDelete
  25. Anonymous26 October 2016 at 09:52

    kia ora waiorere i like ur list: )

    ReplyDelete

Subscribe to: Post Comments (Atom)