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Friday, 8 July 2016

poetry

This week we have learning how to do our poetry.

34 comments:

  1. Hi Waiorere it's Te Aroha from Kawakawa primary school :) I really like your poems! You have good alliteration in your poems. I also really like how when you go onto the the next page it flips. Thats really clever ;) How do you do that? Nice work =D

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  2. Thank you Te Aroha you made me cry and I'm happy.

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  3. Nice Job wai Your so good for your poetry

    Can you teach me your trikes plz?

    C ya hope you feel better wai

    Amethyst :D

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  4. Kia ora Waiorere! It's Room 7 from Kawakawa! We were excited when we saw your blog. We really liked what we saw on your blog. You used some really good extraordinary adjectives, we loved your rhymes, and it was really cool the way you made your slides moved.
    Ka kite ano :)

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  5. thank you room 7 from kawkawa:)

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  8. hi waio its mahuta from kawakawa primary school i like it its cool by mahuta comment soon pleas waio

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  9. Hi waiorere i think that your poem is really cool i heard you cried because you think that everyone forgot about you.
    by havahna.

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  11. Hi Waiorere It's Leilani from Kawakawa primary miss you heaps and great work on your poems I especially like the alphabet poem and the buzzing bee animation nice work and if you want to check out my blog one day go to seeya

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  12. Hi Waiorere I like your poem its really cool and can you teach me
    how to flip the paiges please I miss you so much I hope we can see you at kawakawa primary school some day plz come and visit us plz
    by Eva

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  13. hi waiorere its rawiri i felt realy sad when you left but i've got to say nice poetry ooooo and do you take your crombook home?

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  14. I love your poems keep up the good work.

    By JD

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  15. hi waiorere my name is Maumahara and I like your learning.

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  16. hi waiorere my name is Maumahara and I like your learning.

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  17. kia ora waiorere i like ur list: )

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