Last week we were doing similes for our writing. Here is my writing recount. See if you can stop my good simile and if you can get a great picture of what my Mothers Day look like.
♥Mother’s Day♥
“Yay! it’s mother’s day,” I yelled with a smile on my face. I zoomed off to my mum like a tiger racing for its prey and said, “Happy mother’s day!” When she came in the kitchen I told her to sit down on the shiny couch in the sitting room, the one that moves like a bug. She was so happy! I told her I was going to make an excellent breakfast. I sped to the kitchen again and baked a delicious pancake. The pancake had drizzled syrup, mashed cream followed by a drop of hard sweet candy. When my mum ate the pancake she said it was as yummy as a roasted chicken.
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