Wednesday, 30 August 2017

Descriptive Writing

Aloha bloggers.
This week we had scientists come and observe  us working on our Chromebooks.
When they were here we did this writing, we used our 5 senses.
We had to describe all our sentences and use adjectives.
Here's my work I did yesterday:

My skin started to shine when I ran into the deep blue sea.

I could hear the crabs snapping their claws as they were getting  ready to charge at me.

The sight of the sun shined in my eye when I was lying in the prickley sand.

The taste of a sandwich made my taste buds tingle with joy.

When I a touch a blue dolphin as I was jumping diving to getting some treasure.
The trees swayed side to side as they were sing peacefully.

By Waiorere

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